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lazydiana
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I'm against using the death penalty method of punishing criminals. First of all, death penalty is no different from committing a murder. If court accepts the death penalty, citizens will think that it is okay to kill people that have a reason to be hated. Also, since it is important to help citizens avoid committing murder, using the death penalty will not be useful for the society as it is just like committing a murder. In addition, dying is an easy way out for a criminal. When a person commits a crime they should spend more time paying for their actions instead of ending their life without understanding what they have done wrong and maybe correct their mistake in the future.
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In contrast, we have to give criminals another chance to be to pay for crimes leave prison and become a part of society as a productive citizen. Most importantly, lethal injection sometimes doesn’t work prisoner suffers. Who executes that criminal. Everyone doesn’t want to execute that, but someone has to do that. Also, we don’t know Wheat time will that punishment execute. Criminals when they can meet his or her family. Therefore, I demand the elimination of the death penalty.
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It is very good but I'd write it like this
I'm against using the death penalty method of punishing criminals. First of all, death penalty is no different from committing a murder. If court accepts the death penalty, citizens will think that it is okay to kill people that have a reason to be hated. Also, since it is important to help citizens avoid committing murder, using the death penalty will not be useful for the society as it is just like committing a murder. In addition, dying is an easy way out for a criminal. When a person commits a crime they should spend more time paying for their actions instead of ending their life without understanding what they have done wrong and maybe correct their mistake in the future.
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The issues of Death Penalty
I'm against using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment. First of all, the death penalty is murder. If the courts hand out the death penalty, citizens might think that they too can kill someone who they hate. Also, that form of punishment is too severe . In addition, death is an easy way out for a criminal. When a person kills someone, that person has to recompense for their crime and show remorse.
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In contrast, we have to give criminals another chance to pay for their crimes and leave prison to become a productive citizen for our society as everyone deserves a second chance. Most importantly, lethal injections don't always work which causes the prisoner to suffer. There are also the people that have to execute the criminals, And believe me no one wants to do that. Criminals also never know when it is their time to be executed which gives the criminal and his family a hard life as their child or relative could die without them knowing. Therefore, I demand the elimination of the death penalty.
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In contrast, we have to give criminals another chance to pay for their crimes, leave prison and be a part of society as productive citizens. Most importantly, lethal injection sometimes doesn’t work and the prisoner suffers. Also there is the issue of who gets to execute the criminals. Most people don't want to do that, so the prisoners can end up being on death row for years. The prisoners and their families have to live everyday with the stressful uncertainty of not knowing when the executions will be carried out. Therefore, I demand the elimination of the death penalty.
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@sunnny11 hello... It's hard to edit such long text on HiNative.. You could try using their other website, lang-8.com..
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Oh.. By the way, the death penalty can lead to wrongful execution.
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@sunnny11: Hi, I am so interested in Japanese culture, so I want to learn more about Japan and also want to practice my English with other foreigners~ Could we correspond in the future?😇
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